@ ECRIRE UNE CONCLUSION ?

 

Examinons maintenant la deuxième partie des trois conclusions, celle qui doit normalement questionner l’examinateur et lui proposer un sujet de reflexion.

 

Attention, les 3 textes ne correspondent plus au 3 textes de la fiche 1. Essayez de les renuméroter de façon à ce qu’ils constituent la suite logique des 3 premiers.

 

mIt is our belief that new technologies are a way of spreading democracy around the world. The more access people have to communication facilities, the more they will exchange, share and increase their knowledge, becoming part of a worldwide community, with no frontiers, no barriers of language, race or color.

 

 

m So that paradoxically, the growth of communication technology corresponds to a decline in real communication between people. The trend is reminiscent of the present inflation of information in the media, which reflects a worrying decline in the actual knowledge of TV viewers. In other words, machines grow, while human capacities seem to decrease.

 

mIt seems that, as on many other subjects, people tend to be very divided on new technology. The unknown has always generated dark fantasies, but mankind has always adjusted to new technologies and even survived the fission of the atom.

 

Isolez dans ces conclusions, le sujet de l’élérgissement du sujet proposé par chaque rédacteur

 

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Etudiez la manière dont sont véhiculées les fonctions suivantes

 

impression

généralisation

surenchère

association d’idées

accroissements parallèle

accroissement contradictoire

communication d’une opinion

 

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Rédaction

En vous fondant sur l’étude que nous venons d’achever, écrire 3 developements respectant la spécificité de chaque essai

 

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