@ ECRIRE UNE CONCLUSION ?
Examinons maintenant la deuxième partie des trois
conclusions, celle qui doit normalement questionner l’examinateur et lui
proposer un sujet de reflexion.
Attention,
les 3 textes ne correspondent plus au 3 textes de la fiche 1. Essayez de les
renuméroter de façon à ce qu’ils constituent la suite logique des 3 premiers.
mIt is our belief that
new technologies are a way of spreading democracy around the world. The more
access people have to communication facilities, the more they will exchange,
share and increase their knowledge, becoming part of a worldwide community,
with no frontiers, no barriers of language, race or color. |
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m So that
paradoxically, the growth of communication technology corresponds to a
decline in real communication between people. The trend is reminiscent of the
present inflation of information in the media, which reflects a worrying
decline in the actual knowledge of TV viewers. In other words, machines grow,
while human capacities seem to decrease. |
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mIt seems that, as on many
other subjects, people tend to be very divided on new technology. The unknown
has always generated dark fantasies, but mankind has always adjusted to new
technologies and even survived the fission of the atom. |
Isolez
dans ces conclusions, le sujet de l’élérgissement du sujet proposé par chaque
rédacteur
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Etudiez
la manière dont sont véhiculées les fonctions suivantes
impression généralisation surenchère association d’idées accroissements parallèle accroissement contradictoire communication d’une opinion |
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Rédaction
En vous fondant sur l’étude que nous venons d’achever,
écrire 3 developements respectant la spécificité de chaque essai
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